Bowen Steele

Sybil Salamander

Sean King

wormy bag

Miguel Ramos (Breakfast With Kirby)

Sam Becker

English

Testing to add more lines than 6 to a story

The computer screen then froze. The test caused chaos across the Byline website. People went into a complete panic as the test to add more lines than 6 to a story succeeded, and a 7th line had been entered. The new Byline story had broken the boundaries of imagination.

The characters had started as parakeets, but had become bankers them pythons by the final section of the story. The setting had also moved from a beach to the moon to Omaha, Nebraska. The readers were so confused!

How ludicrous and whimsical! So silly! They must be chuffed... poor readers, they must be suffering back there. Thankfully, I prepared just the thing to make them feel better. See this plate here, examine it for a second. Something beautiful is about to occur here, just see now..

look, something's about to happen now!
c'mon! keep reading!
oh man, it's... it's...!
absolutely nothing.
you were fooled by that, huh?
LMAO, fool.

surely the next paragraph will make it worth your while. So much potential. So much PROMISE. It will be life changing. I know it. Your life will be CHANGED! For the better I hope! You'll become wiser for sure! Go on... soak it up now...

I read on as words magically appeared on the page, written in wet ink. "Turn around dear reader ..." the last sentence appeared. "Your future lies behind you." Instinctively, I looked over my shoulder. Behind me, a figured cloaked in shadow, handed me a quill.

Ghostwriter

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Kaidyn Ramos

Benjamin Chandler

She wanted to fix the shower, cuz its water had no power. She found the answer on Metube, so she was no longer a noob. She went to the store & found it: Tub Spout Diverter Repair Kit. She replaced the old diverter, prayed this no longer diverts her. It is all now working so well-

Isn't this just swell? Flaunting her new bouquet of flowers, Ruby threw poses wandering around town, the zoo, feeling like the person of the hour. Before she could make the lions roar, she was knocked down to the floor by the zoo guards. It was hard to find a ward to dispose her-

flowers at, since the only trash bins were located at the entrance. When she walked out of the zoo, she heard a faint yell from across the street. What could it be?

Lopey, the world famous tree panda, had escaped! He was swinging from branch to branch over the avenue. She hopped on her bike and tried to keep up. Lopey was heading generally toward the bay. What could a tree panda want there?

At the end of Dock 36 came a spout of vapor. A killer whale had swum to the pier. Lopey hopped on the orca's back & clutched its dorsal fin. "Black & white animals unite!" he cried. The pair swam to a battleship where skunks & zebras waited. Captain Penguin nodded, "Let's begin."

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